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Streams of War

by Dan

Final Rating: 5.27. Finished 43 out of 169 entries.

40 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Dan

Description: What's so bad about those streams?

Experience: Some class.

Time taken: Worked on and off throughout the month.

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Cameron:

Pretty good. Could use some work in character animation.

Derek Stewart:

Good hand gestures. Nice staging. Lip sync needs a bit of work and don't be afraid to loosen your characters. Nice threat at the end too!

April Slocombe:

What is that in the background at the end? Despite this confusion, I like the character animation and lip sync and the streams being the touch-sensitive laser beams on the floor.