Gaucelm De Villaret:

Bad rhythm... Doesn't quite match the momentum of the dialogue... Lacks expression...

Marcella D.:

The movements could be improved on

John:

When your characters stop moving, it looks like they turn into statues.

Fernando Incetta:

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.

Tavius Cousar:

The background is a little issue in this animation. The movements of both the rigs need to flow more instead of them moving and then stopping instantly. The lip sync also needs improvement.