Gaucelm De Villaret:

Has some nice setup, but could use more flexibility and expression in what you have.

Lechard P:

I'm very confused by the lighting

Connor Leuck:

This would be much better with more emotion added to the face and reactions to dialogue.

Marcella D.:

Not bad

Fernando Incetta:

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.