VanG:

Needs better camera placement. There is too much head space on the top of the screen.

Sabrina Winkel:

That one was awsome

Marcella D.:

Not bad

Hannah:

This looks good but I would fix the camera so that she's closer in the shot. She's so tiny in it that it's hard to see details

Miele:

You need to bring the shot closer so we can get a better view of the animation, but I did like this one!

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Well, there is this funny idea, but it doesn't suffice. The movements are basic and "normal" enough, but it doesn't express enough what the dialogue is meant to convey.

Richard Adams:

There is a very...natural, realistic, non-cartoony feel to this that I really like.