Daniel Miller:

the mustache could use some movement on his dialogue

Mostafa Barakat:

Very cute, but the bear doesn't show enough character I feel, the beginning I was lost because I couldn't tell who was supposed to be talking until the bear pointed, usually if you don't have a mouth you want to add more posing.

Divina Gracia:

when inhale and exhale, the shoulder should be moving too

Laajaj Nassim:

At the beginning the left character catch our attention so it's seems that he's the one who speaks..