Hadas Rosen:

I would've like to see the other character! I couldn't tell if he was playing both voices, since his movements synced up with the accents of the off-screen character's. Make it clear what's happening! Also, this is a good start, but push beyond the block-in!

Carl Slate:

I like your frequent change of facial expressions. The character looks like he feels stressed.

Kimberly Holbrook:

While this shows an attempt, it seems to be a lazy way of getting out of work. There is no second character and Max is barely animated.