Marie-Lou:

I loved the story ! You put a great effort in it and we can see it. The background incrediblae. If we speak only of animation, of course there are a lots of things that could be improved but you have potential ;)) Be careful you have a jump cut at frame 61. I believe you wanted to cut with the movement of your character but if you do so you have to change the value of your plan because your character can't stay at the same scale while your entire foreground just disappear.