Eden:

I like the 2d approach but it's hard to see what's going on. Try learning perspective

Marie-Lou:

Good work :) Be careful because we don't understand the link between the characters, as you didn't use perspective (even if it's only greyscale) to separate your characters. We have trouble understanding their actions, and you didn't use lipsync so we don't know who say what. Keep going :))

ronda crom:

6 stars....love the char. design as simple shapes for the most part. Gotta work on boiling as to the char's jumpiness looking. Stay on lines when drawings. No deviations. You already know to work on Lip Sync.......So do post more and yes u will emprove just by doing more !!!!!