philipp seis:

really nice one :)

Danny Kneip:

There are a lot of good things about this entry and it has some great potential. I feel the lip sync is weak but the performances are mostly believable and I am instantly interested in these characters and their relationship. well done.

Aanal Kumar:

gestures are awasom!!!!!

Rob Small:

Some nice small details (the woman's heavy sigh), but the pointing action by the man doesn't make sense. He goes from calm and in control to seemingly apprehensive and then back to calm again (waving his hand dismissively). It's not very clear.

Edward Chris Evjen:

Stage the examining of the envelope to break the silhouette.

Sean McDonald:

Hand movements on opening the letter and putting in his pocket are really natural. Nice!

Jesse J. Jones:

The floaty cam is distracting and takes away from the otherwise good animation! :)

Jacob Scamell:

The staging is off, the actions is lost in the scene for the most part. Needs to be more exaggerated or change the staging.

Sergio Barragan L:

great idea!

Avinash Kharat:

great one