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Bakerry

by pap

Final Rating: 5.39. Finished 33 out of 185 entries.

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Animator: pap

Description: The man who boring canned food.

Experience: 4 Month on trainee

Time taken: 16 Days

Comments:

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Poh hui:

overall looks good! just that the "baker" seems like always repeating the same pose, movement. If you could break it up a little, have a different poses, it would be superb!

Pk kub:

Good.

Laurent Châtellier:

Nice staging and animation. One of the very good entries I think.
You could refine the lipsync even further. ( "Factory" is missing the F shape, "food" has no OO shape.)
"out of you(a)" needs to stay more open in the end.