Comments:
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Aaron Clement:
A little floaty in places. It has potential.
Richard Adams:
Really fun idea, nicely staged. Movements, a bit floaty. See the forums about dealing with floatiness.
John M:
Quite nice. A little cinematography would go a long way to improve this. The shot we have could be setting the scene, then a closer shot of the characters when they are speaking could work nicely.
Animator: MFuller
Description: Frustrated Waitress
Experience: 1 Year
Time taken: 60 hours