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167 Years | xmaarten

by xmaarten

Final Rating: 4.35. Finished 88 out of 218 entries.

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Animator: xmaarten

Description: Entry for the Epic May competition by xmaarten.

Experience: Started this year

Time taken: With the whole scene and rendering couple of days

Comments:

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Richard Adams:

Lip syncing and facial expressiveness a bit lacking. Body mechanics however is superb, as is the VFX.

Ben Zingo:

Appears that you're using stock/repeated walk cycles, which defeats the point of an animation competition. There's also too many camera cuts, and they come at times when sometimes the character is looking away, which seems an odd choice.

杨少波:

垃圾

ro crown:

Waaaay too many cuts for the wrong reasons of coverup of the lack of practice of lip sync....but love the truck camera move...
so a low 5 star rating from me for that reason...
slow down and stop trying to top the expert hollywood types who know what they are doing for the right reasons from what they have learned from trail and error experience.,,IMO

Michael Moralejo:

Nice work!

David Woodard:

I can feel the flames. Awesome!