Paula Decanini:

You crossed the 180 degree line with the camera twice. No movements or cuts are necessary with this shot. Keep the camera at the end through the whole scene. Animation pretty good, could use more polish.

Kai Saunders:

Really liked the animations and the scene. Mouth movement seems as if their floating and not saying the words fully.

Yurika Nishi-Imai:

this is where everyone thinks "with great power..."
Good job! Is that toon shading?

Jez:

interesting rendering technique