Tobias Fuhr:

great expression, hands and movement of camera... congratulations

Paula Decanini:

The second camera move is unnecessary. Also the weight shift in the shoulders doesn't make sense mechanically.

Blond:

nice poses.

Amartya Mukherji:

very nice

Reginald Crumpler:

Damn nice! : D

Daniel Abercrombie:

The lip sync seemed a bit out. But that was quite good! If you sort out the dodgy material on the glass, got rid of the world axis and the camera outline you could throw it on a port folio!