Jennie:

nice gentle walk cycle

Angelica White:

I love how you've implemented this with two speaking characters, the story comes across great, love the expressions. I do wish the second character's collapse was timed with the thud in the sound clip.

Darren Evander:

a bit floaty.

Kyra Simone:

More bounce at the end of actions, please! Especially that last one. And as for the point at 138, love the energy, but a SNAP at the end, where it just stops and buckles back like a TV antenna like boyoyoing... that's what would work better.

Margot Menendez:

Your scene could use more color in the background and Mery's skin (unless she's a vampire, in which case you're good there)