Parisa:

More focusing on lip-syncing and hand try to give it a bit nicer shape.

Richard Adams:

I'm really liking this one. Lip movements could be pushed a bit more (more exaggerated), but otherwise...soooo natural. Love the mannerisms her face has and the personality you gave her.

Kyra Simone:

Try to tilt those eyebrows more! I see the expression trying to come out, but the eyebrows in that same, sallow position makes me question.

Spriley Cherenfant:

The lighting and rendering is well done, the staging is great, but could be better as the white background leaves some question to be answered in terms of the location and context of the story.

Quinn Dickenson:

Wrong animal :/