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Bong Siao Si Assigment

by Bong Siao Si

Final Rating: 5.53. Finished 44 out of 243 entries.

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Animator: Bong Siao Si

Description: Force by dear teacher, Raymond

Experience: student

Time taken: 43hours

Comments:

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Tim Collins:

Cool concept!

Dina Coletti:

Hey! Nice job on your animation. I think you did a great job with setting up the scene and telling a small story. The transition into the second Malcolm was really cool and smooth! I also love the last shot "...help someone you love". I think that end animation is really well done. I think you can definitely work on pushing your animation in a couple of areas. Mainly, I think you could use some more in-between poses! The stand is a bit rough, but I think going through and adding some in-betweens, as well as checking out your graph editor, could help make it smoother! Overall, great work!!