Comments:
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Brandon Teta:
I love your characters! The lip sync could use some work as some mouth shapes are missing. I'd also like to see an additional pose and some in-betweens for when the larger character scootches up against the smaller one.
Alexander Dvorak:
While I like the story portrayed in this story board, I'm not sure it fits the line that well. That being said, you did a great job of capturing the emotions of the characters and conveying the mood you set out to convey, and I think the style you used helps push that further. I did notice that your line work on some of the frames, especially the ones with subtle or little movement, seem inconsistent between frames. This makes it seem like the characters are always moving, even when they shouldn't be.
Desiree Cedillo Orozco:
the timing when the character that's talking gets near the other it's a bit weird, maybe too fast (it also gets smaller, remember to always compare the size of your key frames :0). Perhaps it would've been better if he was already close to her...
Richard Adams:
So beautifully drawn, very appealing character designs.
Animator: Emilio Juárez
Description: A brother consoling his sister as she got hurt and her bike broke down
Experience: I have almost a year as an animator and this is my first time participating in a competition.
Time taken: It took me more and less 3 weeks to animate it.