Nzuri Parker:

I think the overall feeling is there, but I might suggest adding more acting in the hands and shoulders. The hands don't seem to leave or change position, but I think adding just a little movement can add to the acting. Lastly, an additional person being in the shot responding/ listening could make the scene feel a bit more natural. I think what you're going for is subtlety and, I like that.

Richard Adams:

Needs more frames per second to smooth out the somewhat stuttery animation. Superb otherwise.