Kalliope Draga Raptis:

I think this is a nice start, you could do better in acting and gesture movement because it looks stiff

Grace Riley:

I really like this idea! There are two main things that stand out to me, the first is that the scene is really dark so it’s a little hard to see what’s going on. The second is just the clavicles of the speaking character aren’t moving, so I think adding a little motion with those will really help convey the body language of the character.