Comments:
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Daniel:
Hi i would like to see the animation this looks more like an animatic. Cheers!
Conway Dobbs:
Story is nice, but the start needs work.
Vedanth Panchoo:
The character designs look cool, but everything is going at such a fast pace, I'm losing track at what's going on.
Andrew Viianen:
Too many cuts and straight on shots, felt a bit jarring.
Less could be more here by focusing more on the boxer statue punk rocker dude bit. I feel like this could have been a 2-3 shot scene.
Donald Brooks:
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Adam Rhoades:
there are way to many cuts. you should try and shorten it. Make some longer than others in line with the comedic timing of the audio. Great work though.
Animator: Katie hall
Description: Two best friends check out a haunted museum for fun when it starts to attack.
Experience: Third year animation s student
Time taken: 21 days