Comments:
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John M:
Extra points for the storyline, but animation lacking and too many camera movements. Needs to be a lot crisper. Nice try.
Daniel Miller:
it'd be funny if the baker switched the vials with the other guy at "...it wouldn't be funny at all"
Eilin Berrio:
I like your story but I believe animation could be much better, more interesting poses (line of actions), composition (rule of thirds)...
Catherine Lachepelle:
The characters are too static : add body and hand movement during the dialogue to give them more life
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:
The character animation is clearly still in keyposes, and the camera cuts are very confusing.
Animator: shannon bailey
Description: The two main characters are a scientist and a chef
The chef is carrying a secret recipe and the scientist is carrying poison. The two men walk into one another and mix the viles up.
Experience: 10 years
Time taken: 2 weeks