Paula Gail Grisell-Goldstein:

A lot of action; some of it is confusing.

Richard Carrillo Barrios:

Who's talking?

Sabrina Winkel:

What in the planet earth of tremendous mortal humans did I just watch?!

Chris Clarke:

The fighting is cool, but I'm not sure who is talking.

Shakya Achyut:

Lol Good idea... But think about it, if disney/Pixar gives you this dialogue to animate, wont be good idea to present it to them.

elreydelbarrio:

It doesn't make any sense with the audio

predrag lazic:

The two ladies being different people took a bit to register. Not bad though.

Byron Pockrandt:

Nice action, needs some work on the timing, a little too fast with the kick and throw. A little too slow with the transition between attacks. The two guys should stand in a more natural pose. The last girl's lip sync is ok, could use some clean up. I would like to see the main girl lips move.

John Sloan:

Characters moth really cant be seen, and the full body motion is incredibly robotic.