ro crown:

Never heard the background noise,,,,so this fits like a tee

Kyra Simone:

This is rare! I love the designs and expressions, but you actually want to go for either LESS settle drawings or putting them closer together. Their faces slump a little too much without saying much.

Oliver Gallagher:

I like the cuts and framing of the shots, but the lips don't seem to sync with the audio. Additionally I don't quite understand narrative this one is going for, but it is decent.