by philipp seis
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Work on your acting choices, I think it was sort of over-acted and way too cartoony
I like your animation. good work, but he is overacting. less is sometimes more! :)
Too many movements to keep up with in general. Between 47-125 these moves could almost be removed and replaced with something much simpler ( or just toned down a lot). The animation is actually quite good for the most part, just some questionable acting choices imo.
Some nice poses, but he's overacting.
too many poses
acting is interesting, not sure it fits the quiet, subtle audio.
The movement looks a little too jerky. For the acting, there are too many poses, maybe you can try to keep it simple, and smooth out the animation.
too much movement, sometimes less is more
I like his swagger
too much movements.. just 4-5 is enough for this short time
he does a little too many big movements for such a subtle dialouge, try to to tone down the jumps in poses a bit. On frame 82 lower his left elbow down a bit, as it weighs a bit. Keep at it!
too much movements and poping.
Animator: philipp seis
Description: I imagined a guy sitting at a campfire
saying this sentence.
Experience: a view years
Time taken: 6 days