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i liked how he's breathing.
nice acting but way too much camera changes !
Nicely done! Characters all move great and the acting is pretty good. I like the story you tell with the expression on the therapist's face and how he reaches for a picture, as though this is advice he could also learn from. The problem with this one is the camera. It moves around way too much. Having cuts for nearly every pause isn't necessary and mostly just damages the mood. I do like the cut for "exactly who you are" but beyond resetting the shot afterwards, the rest are arbitrary. I feel like a camera pan to include the picture in the shot would've been more effective if you still wanted a reveal for the story.
The "good mood, bad mood" action seems to be a bit too exaggerated.
Waddy Devas Wiggle:
keep it up the good work.
Animator: Mark Thompson
Description: Malcolm rig provided by AnimSchool
Morpheous rig(s) provided by Josh Burton
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 60 hours