Final Rating: 4.31. Finished 118 out of 211 entries.

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Animator: Jamshid Noori

Description: talking with colleague

Experience: One and half year

Time taken: twee weeks

Comments:

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Joseph Zach:

The lip sync is off and the drag on the mouth is a little slow and obvious for my taste. .

Fabian Rosenkranz:

I don't understand the head movement. Lip sync is way off.

Greg Stovell:

Cooll body mechanics. Feels a bit floaty. The lip synch can use some work. Great mood though.

David Macatantan:

Strong key poses.

Breakdowns are off and so is the lip sync.

Jon Coppock:

Head poses feel very unnatural, lip sync is off, hands bend unnaturally.

Aaron Rivera:

Not bad overall, but he seems really distracted, looking at a lot of different things around the room, which usually doesn't happen when you're contemplating something or talking to someone. The lip sync is also really loose looking and the jaw movement seems really weird on the first head twirl. I don't think the jaw would lag that much. Either way, most of the movement and acting are solid, as are the expressions. Not bad!

Mike M.:

Lip sync needs work. Nice body movement though.

Hannah:

Cool idea, but the over-the-top emoting and overlap doesn't quite fit this scene.

April Slocombe:

The lip sync needs improving and the position of the hands at around frame 100 is the same until the end but good subtle movement otherwise.

Merlyn Moynagh:

sound dialogue and animation isn't synced! Oh dear,