philipp seis:

women on red boxes, are hard to cheer up ;)

Philippe Duvin:

You should try to have a straight cut rather a long tilt / pan / whatever camera movement you have here.

Jon Coppock:

Camera move is odd. mouth shapes need a lot of refinement.

Tobias:

I didn't understand the context?

Merlyn Moynagh:

lip sync isn't there yet, no blinks yet. This shot doesnt feel ready, watch his forehead the emotions seem very un-natural and moves a bit too much. Feels auto splined. Ditch the distracting camera move and see if a camera cut works better for your scene. Just keep practicing! good pose choice for the female.

Kamal Bhattacharjee:

if not finished please don't submitt

kishan Rathod:

Needs a lot of improvement