Aaron Rivera:

Needs some work, but is a solid start. It feels a little stiff overall, between the mostly unmoving body and the mostly unchanged expression of the man, it feels like there needs to be a little more movement to accent the tone. I do like the movement on the girl though, she seems to react appropriately to the conversation, though the two models seem a little jarring because of the difference in head size. A good start overall.

Merlyn Moynagh:

Spine never moves, it very much feels like he's glued to the bench. Try to have the spine and body twist a bit and move when he turns, not too much. Female character on the left is looking alright, but same goes with her, try to have her body move as well when she turns her head. Great idea!