Time to Talk
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he's lying. The guy is lying. Run girl !
It;s going REALLY slow. I understand that the dialogue isn't that fast, but this is taking it a bit to the extreme. On the upside, you're motions are pretty smooth just timing is off.
Nice ! the animation is a bit floaty and the composition is a bit distracting when the woman turns toward us. But nice acting choices !!
if the voice take a breack, don't hesitate to stop the body's movements sometimes. just one second. every movement you make is connected to another, wich make the acting too predictable.
I would bring the camera in closer so we get a clearer view of the woman's facial expressions
This is excellent. The only gripe I really have is that the lip sync feels a little slow, by which I mean the mouth moves at a slower rate than is needed to articulate the dialog. Otherwise the movement, acting, and story are excellent.
Your animation is floating everywhere....
Seems a tad floaty and the guy's arm is going through the table
Animator: Theron Chaplin
Description: A man pleads with his wife not to leave him.
Experience: 3+ years amateur
Time taken: 40 hours