Final Rating: 4.95. Finished 68 out of 211 entries.

24 views including the voting period.


Animator: Theron Chaplin

Description: A man pleads with his wife not to leave him.

Experience: 3+ years amateur

Time taken: 40 hours


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philipp seis:

he's lying. The guy is lying. Run girl !

Jonathan C.:

It;s going REALLY slow. I understand that the dialogue isn't that fast, but this is taking it a bit to the extreme. On the upside, you're motions are pretty smooth just timing is off.

Philippe Duvin:

Nice ! the animation is a bit floaty and the composition is a bit distracting when the woman turns toward us. But nice acting choices !!


if the voice take a breack, don't hesitate to stop the body's movements sometimes. just one second. every movement you make is connected to another, wich make the acting too predictable.

Shark Bait:

I would bring the camera in closer so we get a clearer view of the woman's facial expressions

Aaron Rivera:

This is excellent. The only gripe I really have is that the lip sync feels a little slow, by which I mean the mouth moves at a slower rate than is needed to articulate the dialog. Otherwise the movement, acting, and story are excellent.

Davit Martirosyan:

Your animation is floating everywhere....

Joseph Zach:

Seems a tad floaty and the guy's arm is going through the table