Dad , I love you .
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This is great, I am no where near your level, but I think maybe you could have pushed the facial expressions on the guy a little bit more. Really love the end.
Good stuff in there. The materials are interesting.
Do you get the rubber effect with subsurface scattering ? The hug in the end is very touching,
and the guy has real weight. I'd only doublecheck the lipsynch timing in the beginning.
Nicely presented and subtle acting choices really work well. The lip sync lets it down unfortunately, not being quite in time.
Great job! I really like the hug at the end. Lip sync needs a fair bit of improvement but that's nothing a bit of practice won't take care of :)
Really like it! Really sweet and delicate.
Nice mood, very good framing and camera work. Nice poses, too.
I really like the composition and the staging!
Awesome nice work love the emotion and the facial expressions but you need more work on the lips over all nice work
Isai Calderon III:
Great job! I will suggest pushing the mouth shapes a lot more, especially if dad has such a small mouth.
Also, dad takes up a lot of space in the frame (he's a big guy), so it feels quite tight. I suggest pulling back in the first shot, then push in on the last shot. Keep in mind the "breathing room" above his head as well. I believe these two notes should push your shot quite a lot :)
This is gorgeous and touching- tightening up the lip sync would have cinched this for me.
but the step cut standing of the character can cost you stars!
The lip sync could have done with a bit more work by making the man's mouth open more for the majority of the dialogue but the poses and facial expressions are great and the animation is not overdone.
great display of emotion!
Aww, i love this
wow what a hug! nice job!
Some good subtle animation there. The lip syncing could use some work though.
Love the direction of this piece. The guy acting is too neutral, if he look more genuinely concern it will give a more convincing acting. Maybe squint or furrow brows and a tighter lip.. The girl transition to the hug is unclear. she probably look higher and bursting to tears at frame 340 and head towards a hug after cutting to wider shot. Looking really great! Add stronger emotion / expressions as this is a subtle piece. It will look even moreee AWESOME!! :)
Description: No man in the world can love everything you're like your dad.
Experience: 5 year
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