Final Rating: 3.90. Finished 147 out of 211 entries.

13 views including the voting period.


Animator: Joe Dykstra

Description: A heartbroken woman is consoled by her father in his office. (I apologize for the lighting glitch, I could not find a solution, but felt it was worth keeping the camera and light positioning as they are)

Experience: Novice, about 1 year.

Time taken: One week


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Very well done. The lighting is very good.

Diane Aarts:

don't need camera moves, maybe just cut to last line.

William Sperling:

Remove the camera move... Also try to work on the expression on the mans face.