by Joe Dykstra
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Very well done. The lighting is very good.
don't need camera moves, maybe just cut to last line.
Remove the camera move... Also try to work on the expression on the mans face.
Animator: Joe Dykstra
Description: A heartbroken woman is consoled by her father in his office. (I apologize for the lighting glitch, I could not find a solution, but felt it was worth keeping the camera and light positioning as they are)
Experience: Novice, about 1 year.
Time taken: One week