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nice acting. Your main character is a bit close to the border of the frame, you could try to restage your shot, it would improve it a lot !
moving hold is good.. but a pause at times gives more texture :)
Love the silent character's expressions - as well as the eyes.
Description: A father you have some difficulties to give some advise to her dauther.
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: between 50 and 55 hours