An intimaate conversation
by Laura P.
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The animation is rather stiff.
Could have used a little more time.
Animation's a little floaty and there are a couple of jerky movements but the poses are good and I like the idea of the man talking to himself in the mirror.
Dan Raigorodsky Bendahan:
I think a 3/4 camera would work better
try larger mouth movements, I could barely recognize his mouth was moving at all. nice weight when he touches the table
Animator: Laura P.
Description: A man, reflecting about finding true love
Experience: 1 Year
Time taken: About two weeks