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An intimaate conversation

by Laura P.

Final Rating: 3.26. Finished 182 out of 211 entries.

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Animator: Laura P.

Description: A man, reflecting about finding true love

Experience: 1 Year

Time taken: About two weeks

Comments:

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Nick Gibson:

The animation is rather stiff.

David Macatantan:

Could have used a little more time.

April Slocombe:

Animation's a little floaty and there are a couple of jerky movements but the poses are good and I like the idea of the man talking to himself in the mirror.

Dan Raigorodsky Bendahan:

I think a 3/4 camera would work better

Merlyn Moynagh:

try larger mouth movements, I could barely recognize his mouth was moving at all. nice weight when he touches the table