I'm uhh, Divorcing you.
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Beautiful render but the actions don't feel as though they match up with the duologue
overall, rather well done though :)
Looks pretty solid. I'd tone down the animation a bit so it's more subtle, and get rid of the camera movements. It's kind of unnecessary.
Very moody ! The hands are creepy. She should divorce the guy. Or no...that's her lawer right ?
Shadow cuts his body in two at the neck, might look better to have his face only partially covered by shadow.
Dan Raigorodsky Bendahan:
I think the camera shake doesn't help to the story so keep it simple !
Pretty good! The lip sync could use some touching up and the shakeycam was unnecessary but overall it's solid.
Also, that divorce document is HUGE.
good but the movements of the camera are a bit too random
rather give more time in your animation!
Too much camera movement
good idea...the camera was a little jarring though
I like the set up, but the camera movement is a bit distracting.
The camera is moving too much. It's really distracting and there is no use for it. I don't think it's a good idea to put the face of your character like that. We can't really see his expression and lipsync. Careful with the gestures. He's doing a lot of different ones in a very few time, it doesn't look very natural.
your lighting is nice but its hiding what this club is all about, your ANIMATION.
Description: Uh , Husband is divorcing his wife. It just wasn't working out.
Experience: Doing CG work for 4 years, did actualy animation for 1.5 years
Time taken: 5-6 days, (not including multiple attempts)