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Ben Irmen's Father Son Talk

by Ben Irmen

Final Rating: 3.73. Finished 159 out of 211 entries.

12 views including the voting period.


Animator: Ben Irmen

Description: A father has a heart to heart with his son at the parks.

Experience: I have been in school for animation for a year and a half

Time taken: 2 weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

philipp seis:

the right Character looks funny. And he got poked in the eye ;)

Dan Raigorodsky Bendahan:

Watch the intersections and try to polish your animation.

Aaron Rivera:

Some of the movements feel a little off, like at the end when both arms move together and bob up and down, but some of it works since he's talking to a child, especially the poking and the whimsical hand flare. The expressions are pretty great too. With some tweaking and tightening up this would be excellent.

Mahesh Waran:

good ! keep animating !