Comments:
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philipp seis:
the right Character looks funny. And he got poked in the eye ;)
Dan Raigorodsky Bendahan:
Watch the intersections and try to polish your animation.
Aaron Rivera:
Some of the movements feel a little off, like at the end when both arms move together and bob up and down, but some of it works since he's talking to a child, especially the poking and the whimsical hand flare. The expressions are pretty great too. With some tweaking and tightening up this would be excellent.
Mahesh Waran:
good ! keep animating !
Animator: Ben Irmen
Description: A father has a heart to heart with his son at the parks.
Experience: I have been in school for animation for a year and a half
Time taken: 2 weeks