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The lip syncing needs a lot of work, and the animation in general needs more fluidity. Also not sure how the spiders are supposed to fit into the story telling.
Mouth shapes need a lot of work, use reference, and spend more time in polishing.
Not really much body animation going on here because of the web, but I think you could've managed it. Given how his shoulders moved it would've at least stretched the web some, so I don't feel like the situation justifies the stiffness of the animation or the poses. It is funny how nonchalant he is about being trapped in a giant spider web covered in spiders though. Lip sync could use work though.
very awkwardly stuck in the web, feels very un-natural that he would be stuck that way with his shoulders dislocated without a wince of pain. Watch frame 159 for that head break and watch that your arcs and spacing. Very funny situation, would of never thought of it! loved the hand hold at the end.
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