Aaron Rivera:

A shirtless, hairy, obese man talking to a picture of himself? That's an odd choice for this clip. Whatever the case, the movement here seems rather loose and could use some tightening for emphasis, though oddly the hands seem really stiff, as do the expressions. The posing also seems weird, as the smoother movments feel causal, while the bent looking legs make him feel tense. There's a lot of strange combinations that don't really work well here, but with some work I could see this being fine.

Merlyn Moynagh:

camera move is un-needed, he moves his arms a bit to much, try placing a moving hold for some of the poses to get a nicer look.