Aaron Rivera:

Needs a lot of work. The base movement is there but everything feels really stiff, especially with the head-on view. It feels a little too symetrical body language is minimal outside the arms, which seem limited by the shapes used. the pupils of the eyes change size at odd times and the attempt at perspective doesn't yield much. The background is beautiful but that's not the focus of the competition. Work on acting and movement first, then complete it if you have the time.

David Macatantan:

Great coloring.

Animation is really stiff.

The mouth is opening and closing at the right times but stays the same length. The dialogue is a lot of oo sounds that can benefit from the fish face mouth movement.

Josh Wood:

Theres a lot of twinning in this

Erika Johnsson:

A bit stiff movement wise

Merlyn Moynagh:

Try to move the body a bit more to give it a sense of life, the idea and staging is nice. Try to have his body act more, not just his face! Creative idea