by DemonEye Elf
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Lypsinc is very poor.... And acting way for me is not clear at all
The lipsync doesnt seem to fit at all. The movements looked pretty natural though, even though the body language could be improved.
his posture at the beginning is in a way that makes you feel he is talking to phone or something, but overall it a very well done job!
Wow, some really great facial expressions there.
Great piece. I really like the snappiness and the weight shifts. The acting seems a bit too busy for the tone of the dialogue though. The left hand can use a bit of work. It doesn't really rest on the side of the head (a bit floaty). So far, one of my favorites.
This has a lot of good stuff going for it, but the timing is a bit sporadic, seems like the transitions from poses don't blend well, and when he waxes psychotic, the mood isn't pronounced enough to give real impact, feels clunky.
Great atmospherics, the only think that bugs me is the extra mouth movement around frame 300. It looks like a miss-lip sync.
Looks fantastic in the middle with lots of subtle but snappy movements, great acting and fantastic detail, but the beginning and end have some oddities. The lip sync feels stiff on "In my opinion" and it's either off on "that's the kind of person worth sticking with". That last phrase is also accompanied by some strangely intense movements and expressions compared to the very casual, flowing movements before it. When the eyes open wide the eyebrows get angry and the tiny pupils make him look like he's about to scream. Otherwise this is an awesome entry.
the lip sync is a frame late 0_0
The pose on frame 380 is a bot strange. The way his left hand is at the beginning looks like he's on the phone.The move on frame 220 to 230 is weird.
Looks great. His left hand pose during the first few frames felt like he was holding a phone and talking through that...anyways good stuff!!
Waddy Devas Wiggle:
wow,nice work,welllllll doneeeeee
Animator: DemonEye Elf
Experience: 1 year 3 months
Time taken: 1 month on and off