Comments:
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Eric Raffle:
terrible, you need to work on blocking your your scene with poses and get your motion right and then add lip-sync, as far as I can see you ran out of time because there is no real motion to your characters
Paul Rodriguez:
Some of the animation is still in step, ensure you have it in auto
Animator: Joshua Tucker
Description: My 11 Second Club submission for April 2015.
Experience: Four months.
Time taken: A month.