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too many camera cuts, not enough animation.
lacks flair, they not really doing much in the scene and you need better camera views
Batch render should have been used instead of Playblast
The character standing at the back looks a little stiff. Need to move it a bit more. And work on the expressions, also.
The video was ok. The part that got me was the model at the door he hardly make any kind of movement at all besides moving his head left and right.
Description: conversation happening between the two brothers about the bad memories of the previous trip
Time taken: 1 week