Comments:
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Kiefer Paulson:
why does the car look so ashamed at the end? also, where did you get that rig?
Eric Raffle:
you needed more expressions in your cars eyes with some eye lid movement and maybe a closer shot of the human when he delivered hi line because I saw nothing he was too far away from the camera shot
Craig Portnoy:
Add some breakdowns on the guy. You just have pose A to B to C to D
Jed B.:
Try some moving holds to give it a bit more life and you'll have something. The posing is decent.
Gargi:
Good Concept I like the End
Jordan Gross:
The background, characters, and their respective animations look good. Only thing is there's no car that can talk about flying.
Harry G:
Needs work, at the moment it is going from pose to pose.
Animator: Rishi Harshvardhan
Description: It is a conversation between a car, whose tire is punctured, and a frustrated man trying to change the tire.
Experience: Student.
Time taken: Two weeks.