by Sarah Kenny
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you should have kept his hand on his stomach because it looks believable but then suddenly as he sat down he was all better and then he threw the first aid kit and he was back to being hurt, try to act out your scene to give more realism
Try to improve ur poses
It's like robotic
I don't really get the idea of this clip. But I like the idea, though.
Great job on the lip sync and animation. I like the scenery. The only thing I can point out is when he closes the door with his foot. Just turn the foot to the right a little.
The video was good. The problems that i saw was the shadows of the couch did not look right. The one of the model who close the door with his foot. It look like his foot was dragging and when he toss the first aid kit the toss did not look natural.
Animator: Sarah Kenny
Description: Frankie gets Reginald home, but decides rule number one of their newfound friendship is: Reginald never gets to choose where to go or how to get there ever again.
Experience: 4 months
Time taken: A month of obsession, and approximately 72 hours within Maya.