Eric Raffle:

you needed a second character for this shot , also you could have done without the camera pans and zooms as it was distracting and your movement needed more realism

Chris Tarrant:

Some of the camera movements in the middle feel a bit odd.

Juan Brown:

The animation is good but where is the second character? Is that guy even talking to someone? When the other guy tells him lets go first class next time. He don't even acknowledge him, he avoids him.