One hell of a trip
by Max Debczak
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where's the lip sync?? also, if this guy is talking to himself, like split personalities, it helps to have 2 camera shots to cycle through with the dialogue
^^ this one is an excellent example of what I'm talking about
this was no where near ready for the competition, there is no storyline or plot you only have one character with no speech and your motions are too wavy and have no purpose, try to work on a plot and act out your scene before you animate, your story and scene is what makes a great animation and you look like you were still in development stage with no storyline to follow
Too much hand movement. Try going for more subtle acting.
Can't see any expression of face and talking
Need lacks of fundamentals
Man, I've seen animations where there was lipsync with only mouth movement, and now there's this one with no mouth movement, but only gestures. At least it's great to see gesturing, but the mouth movement can't be ignored either.
Where's the lip synch?
You didnt really do anything that is worth giving a better score.
Animator: Max Debczak
Description: I'm very new to animating so I focused on one character and just the body movements. I worked on this for my freshman animation final at the School of Visual Arts.
Experience: very little
Time taken: 3 weeks