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You need to work on timing
The last shot breaks the 180 line. The shot should be mirrored.
..the 2nd cut is a jump cut, crossing the line, its confusing
Animator: Alyssa Ferris
Description: This is my first experience with animation, let alone animating in Maya! I'm excited to be a part of this community, and to enjoy the process of animating alongside talented people!
Experience: Less Than A Year
Time taken: One Week