Comments:
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Kiefer Paulson:
a beautiful opening shot and solid render, but the animation isn't clean... needs improvement
Eric Raffle:
you had the right flow the right camera movement shots but your lacking in the lip-syncing department and it lost a lot of points
Becky Gilby:
Lip syncing needs some work but the scene is beautiful
Craig Portnoy:
Nice establishing shot. Animation needs work, don't have every body part move at the same time.
Jed B.:
Nice strong poses. Next step is easing and polishing.
Justin Jones:
I like the set. It shows that you can render nice lighting. The animation, however, feels a little stiff, though it was staged pretty good. Good work overall, and keep at it!
Maurice Haywood Jr.:
nice scene
John:
I love the environment,
Animator: Mohsin Ali
Description: A guy seeing off his friend after a trip and both end up reminiscing their time together for a short moment.
Experience: student
Time taken: 3 weeks