Comments:
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Eric Raffle:
the scene render is way too bright it off putting, your motion seems fine but not enough facial expression into your characters
Jez:
like this 3d
Grant Lamb:
The "But uhhh" hold is a bit distractingly long...
John Jefferson:
Pros;
- Great idea for the animation
- Models look nice
- Animation flows definetly well, with some exceptions.
- Expressions are animatied ok.
- Lipsynching is alright.
- Great job animating the water as well.
- Ends the scene perfectly.
Cons:
- Sometimes their expressions either jump instantly from one to another, or worse, just hang and make them kind of dead eyed.
roy cobn:
the zoom out should be some kind of a surprise? well i don't feel it if it is,,,
Jordan Gross:
Good character movement while speaking, and good use of the background info on the bags. The only thing I recommend is adding a background
Martin Strom:
I like the idea of being on a raft. The water looks good. But I feel the lip-sync seems pretty much the same on the chubby guy. I think it could have been more emotion on his mouth when he talks.
Animator: jojo pandit
Description: two guys survival in ocean and come at beach.
Experience: 4.5 yr
Time taken: 1 week 4 days......but rendering taking too long time