by steven croad
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The overall scenery and placement of characters is good (you could have had the red guy more closer and in the shot more), but you could have went with a different camera angle for the scene because the cyan guy is too far away and you cannot see the red guy's face. I would also recommend more fluid finger movement . I did like how you kept all the characters moving instead of them being stiff or frozen throughout the scene.
Animator: steven croad
Description: two characters talking about their road trip
Experience: 8 months as student
Time taken: 2 weeks